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About Me Banned Deviant Critic julyshelied20/Female/Canada Recent Activity Deviant for 5 Years
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:iconduet-with-knives:
I miss the lauren yes I do!

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I don't like your tragic sighs
as if your god has passed you by well hey fool
that's your deception
your angels speak with jilted tongues
the serpent's tale has come undone you have no
strength to squander
The only comfort is the moving of the river
:iconartbit:
Congrats on the DD hon :hug:
I've heard so little of the appearing of virgin Mary in BIH, but I've enjoyed the poem.

Enjoy :)

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:iconeyeballman:
WHEW!!!

("earth shivers under its thin february ice")

I've just spent the better part of the last 2 hours reading your work, having been directed this way by the venerable "random deviant" function. The universe obviously wanted... no, demanded</u > that I find you.

("turning everything to sway and blush")

I wish I could offer pithy, poetically knowledgable comments. I wish I could drop the names of litterary lion(s)(esses), comparing and contrasting your turns of phrase.

("as flesh itself finds new ways to bend")

But being pretty much litterature-impaired (I'm a photographer who reads science fiction), I'm afraid I can't...

("revelations on a dirty mattress")

All I can say after having read read your work (now that my eyes have stopped bleeding and I can see the screen again) is: "I like it a lot".

("raw gasoline that flowers rainbow stains")

Please allow me to make you the first writer on my watch list...


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"They who would give up an essential liberty for temporary security, deserve neither liberty or security" - Benjamin Franklin
:iconeyeballman:
DAMN!!!! I am SO sorry about the formatting error...

I wish there was a "preview" button on these "devious comment" windows. For I am, if nothing else, a LOUSY typist.

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"They who would give up an essential liberty for temporary security, deserve neither liberty or security" - Benjamin Franklin
:iconmsvu:
come join us! :D

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Mount Saint Vincent University
-Excellence- Innovation- Discovery
:iconsinistroverse:
Thoroughly enjoyed the letters and I'm looking forward to catching up on your other stuff now that I have a bit more free time. :) Missed you and your work.

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You're nearly a laugh, You're nearly a laugh,
But you're really a cry...
:iconjulyshelied:
missed you, too, sir!
I am going to steal a glance at your page... better be some niceness for my eyes, there.
I hate the internet, but I like y-o-u and lots of other people on this site. Sad and happy all at once that I'm not using it much.

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Come down to my room
I was thinking about you
and made a pass at myself
:iconduet-with-knives:
I miss zee Lauren!


(its my birthday)

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I don't like your tragic sighs
as if your god has passed you by well hey fool
that's your deception
your angels speak with jilted tongues
the serpent's tale has come undone you have no
strength to squander
The only comfort is the moving of the river

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